Open Poetry #34 |
Back And Forth I Always Go |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Back And Forth I Always Go Having written less recently Not knowing where to start Back and forth I always go Between my mind and heart Its heart and mind debating Both have capacity to write Back and forth I always go Between darkness and light The heart can be blindly led Yet my mind can clearly see Back and forth I always go Between reality and fantasy Placing feelings in context As I internalise emotionally Back and forth I always go Between ins and outs of me Hope©2004 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand well |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Having written less recently Not knowing where to start Back and forth I always go Between my mind and heart" Liked that part. And ditto to what dixie said....i know where you're coming from. I have the same problem, never knowing where to start. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
ah, life...but one way always makes itself clear...eventually Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Hope, the attachment to the past still gives you pain and you express it really in such a beautiful way. The heart can be blindly led Yet my mind can clearly see Back and forth I always go Between reality and fantasy You may enjoy Kayjay's "When love has gone". Hugs and love. Margherita |
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