Open Poetry #34 |
November Ponderings (in the mood of ED) |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
November Ponderings November calls the heart back home To hearth and pumpkin pie ‘Twas geese who fled this graying dome To seek a bluer sky And I seek but a warmer bed A quilt of eider down The remnants of a goose who fled The bleaker fringe of town Prefer I this, an icy cage To life’s most southern shore? Would I not fly this frigid stage, To strut through summer’s door? Some think as though a feathered fowl The season is to be Tis winter makes us prisoner And spring that sets us free But I, in an impending storm Hold with a rabbit’s whim To seek a hollow soft and warm And safely burrow in For ice does not a spirit bind Nor hold a mind apart And love is love, and will unwind The wanderings of a heart Elizabeth Santos |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, Elizabeth! November SURELY does just this! Wonderful! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz....you warm my heart with your words! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya Liz, I've missed you you employ the readers soul with precious keys to open doors....tremendous write a marvelous write for the eyes to turn green with...thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a mood! |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Ice doesn't always bind the spirit or the heart....but oh, it can....this I know foreverwell.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And I seek but a warmer bed A quilt of eider down The remnants of a goose who fled The bleaker fringe of town" Oh Elizabeth,..this is SO beautiful and creates such a cosy mood. The above stanza jumped out at me as just a few days ago I got out my heavy duvet for the bed! November does make us think and do these things...wonderful write! Hugs~Nancy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I sit upon a fence or rail Stalled within a doldrums sail And cannot see beyond the mists No matter how the heart insists But time will do what time will do And I can but await the new. Your write is excellent, Sy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To seek a hollow soft and warm And safely burrow in When such a hollow is found, it matters not how the winds howl or where the ice creeps. *S* This is beautiful, dear lady! *S* |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
oh! enjoyed this, so well done! |
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