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Circles Sphere |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Circles Sphere We spin a web of circles sphere That’s neither far or either near And in the process chase the fox Who holds the key to all the locks? Within the spinning of the web There is a flow and is ebb We are within a firmament Each circle spins a new event. With filigree of fire flies That light, the darkness of the sky We dance unto the fifer’s fife A wick of time a wick of life Illusion spins a fantasy A point within eternity A rainbow of a bridge of sighs And treasure where horizon lies It is an entertaining game But damn if I can see its aim. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) it has an aim? always interesting thoughts to ponder when I read you sir... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Look straight through the crosshairs.... LOL...a fine song you've planted this morning  Happy Friday |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Good morning Sy. No aim needed. Just keep on spinning. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep pondering AND keep aiming... especially if the bull's eye moves! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy your making me dizzy...I'm spinning and spinning. LOL..love your Friday morn write m'friend, ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Me, either, my friend. *S* I just get dizzy trying. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Around and around, and around we go. What be the purpose? ~We do not know!  Goooood morrrrning, Sir Tumbleweed!  Loveya! EA |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You make me laugh through a sigh of poetic enjoyment How much I have learned from you Take care Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy A wonderful pondering you post perpetually!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We are within a firmament Each circle spins a new event. With filigree of fire flies That light, the darkness of the sky We dance unto the fifer’s fife A wick of time a wick of life Illusion spins a fantasy A point within eternity A rainbow of a bridge of sighs And treasure where horizon lies It is an entertaining game But damn if I can see its aim. ====================================== Now I know why Randy was chasing his tail this moring. lol  Sybabers...ya got the rhymes spinning on dimes with this wonderful witty write... With filigree of fire flies That light, the darkness of the sky We dance unto the fifer’s fife A wick of time a wick of life and that verse is soooo cooool it leaves me giddy..just look at the clever word play of assonance and allits. You are our pied piper poet...we'll follow you anywhere.  *ww*    Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat, A chuckle is worth its weight in gold. LeeJ And the song will grow into a tree. LOL scorpio I think you're right. Nancy, Don't get dizzy just get bizzy. Hugs suthern I'm with you. Hugs Earth Angel Did my tumble tickle your nose. Elizabeth, Miss you, love you. Martie LOL the clock is running down. JM, If I could think a wink for you I'd mix it in a drink for you And change into my Randy clothes And kiss you on the lips and nose. Winkiewinkie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write love those ending lines |
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