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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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a chill kiss profferred with blush of rush of- cold air words written in condensation- read . . . winter is near s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Like writing your name on a breath-frosted pane....Nice! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Liked Wranx reply...just like a frosted pane... Excellent imagery Susan. TD |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Being there is condensation, I would have to say there is a warmth just on the other side. Very nice write and I hope you find a title for this one. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
http://www.ibiblio.org/wm/paint/auth/vinci/joconde/joconde.jpg |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent----enjoyed The signs are everywhere.... ----------ice/ford ><> |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice... this just feels organic to read... and since the subject here seems to blend a bit of sensual and a bit of nature, appeals to me. One can also read the layers if they choose, and let it take them to other conclusions... yes.... truly a treat this morning.. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very graphic and alive. But what does s.a.t. stand for? Or is that your signature? Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I breathed on the glass and watched the reflection in vapor as the word appeared C E R T S musta been the garlicburger enjoyed this ms |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you friends - and I am tickled at the mona lisa - i've seen her, you know - in person - well at least the painting  Kethry - s.a.t. is my signature - my initials- i include the "." so that people don't think all my poems end with sat -hehe D-  Have a good day all - 'tis friday -yeah! Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
beautiful write! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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