Open Poetry #34 |
Apologies - I'm just in a writing mood |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Rain was heavy drifting on those dull Sparkling waters Under leaves To stop fighting enough To understand children We have moved from religion To tax And propetry To keep people Together As we parted This area from Everyone else I ask How many people Who tell others How to live Have the time to spend more than A day a month Together Learning how I was formed by these days To make me Go out and find the world To form my own life And eventually to Write Maybe my mother Who could write Had her own ideas These are as usual words Imaging visions of emotions To keep this world Alive Dave |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is a contemplative and deep write just perfect for rainy days and Fridays, of which it's both in Australia. Excellent job. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like Sundays By the way Thanks and yes I still remember the rain as a kid on the pane. Dave |
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