Seymour Tabin
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2004-11-04
07:12 AM
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The Power of Dew
A dew drop woke me from my sleep It was a drop of mornings weep It washed the mist from out my eyes To look upon a rainbow sky
The awe of color struck me dumb And there I lay in still succumb Benumb the twisted edge of wile That brought my face a wistful smile
A moment’s capture in its grace Wove a shroud of mantle lace The odor of a new moan glade A glade, a braid, a spirit maid
I cannot say her name for sure She was the phantom of my lure But love shined on her pretty face And I was caught within its grace
A pleasures treasure and a sigh It was a rainbow caught my eye
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babygirlwlove
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2004-11-04
07:13 AM
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lyrical and endearing tribute to your muse...
much enjoyed, **BabygirL****Intoxicant to the SouL**
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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
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2004-11-04
07:15 AM
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Send that rainbow on to all... for it surely will enthrall the most staid of any, and, it's true... I see the beauty in your view...
 
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-11-04
07:15 AM
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babygirlwlove Your joy is my joy.
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-11-04
07:16 AM
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Sunshine Beauty knows beauty.
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Kit McCallum
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2004-11-04
07:18 AM
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"The odor of a new moan glade A glade, a braid, a spirit maid"
"A pleasures treasure and a sigh It was a rainbow caught my eye"
From internal rhymes to metrical perfection ... this simply sings, Sy. Beautiful! 
Best wishes and hugs, /Kit
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-11-04
07:24 AM
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Kit You hve no idea the pleasure your replies give me.
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ice
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2004-11-04
07:27 AM
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"A moment’s capture in its grace Wove a shroud of mantle lace The odor of a new moan glade A glade, a braid, a spirit maid"
Spirit maids are always beautiful..
Well done, poet sir..enjoyed ---------ice/ford ><>
Come read to me some poem, Some simple and heartfelt lay, That shall soothe this restless feeling And banish the thoughts of day. Longfellow
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-11-04
07:39 AM
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ice That was nice. And I thank you for the read.
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Susan Caldwell
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2004-11-04
07:54 AM
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Mornin'!
Wonderful Sy.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" ~Sarah McLachlan~
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LeeJ
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2004-11-04
07:58 AM
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well sir, you surely send out such beautiful waves of joy to the world...
simply mezmorising!
Thank you
morning sweet man
Give Randy a big hug today
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-11-04
08:09 AM
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Susan, You are a love.
LeeJ Thank you. 
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scorpio
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right...there
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2004-11-04
08:56 AM
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Sy I'm glad you chase the rainbow. This write is a golden one.believe in what your heart feels...
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miscellanea
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2004-11-04
09:02 AM
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Sy, It's soooo great to read your poetry again. My internet has been down for a while, preventing my reading. Gee, I didn't how much I missed you and everyone here! You still have that wonderful metrical song as someone already pointed out. Your words always sing a slow song to me, causing me to pause. Have a great day!
miscellanea
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Kahlil
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2004-11-04
09:03 AM
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beautiful, Sy, thanks for the view...
K
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2004-11-04
09:13 AM
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Now reading this beauty is a perfect way to start the day!!  Beautiful beautiful this is Sy! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~Now while the leaves still dance on the wind While the moon and the clouds come spinning Will you whisper my name again? Again..and again.
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Cpat Hair
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2004-11-04
09:28 AM
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days with rainbows... Left work a while back.. and as I left, the clouds to the west parted enough that there was a beautiful double rainbow in the east...
and a gentle rain falling slow...
thanks for helping me remember that Sy..
rainbows and soul...
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NewEnglandlazurlu
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2004-11-04
09:43 AM
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Good morning Sy .... I cannot think of a more glorious way to start my day. Thank you for your enchanting words.
hugs, MartiA single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. –St. Francis of Assisi
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Gentle Spirit
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2004-11-04
09:58 AM
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another beauty for our morning Sey.  The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love....
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-11-04
10:12 AM
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scorpio You are a good friend, thank you.
miscellanea Hope your computer is well again, missed you.
Kahlil You welcome and thank you.
Nancy, You are a delight. 
Cpat, Enjoyed your comment, thank you.
Marti, Your comment has made my day.
Gentle, You really are a dove.
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Earth Angel
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2004-11-04
10:20 AM
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Good morning, Mr. T. ~
I am certain that if I had the opportunity ~ and the pleasure! ~ of looking into your eyes, I would see a rainbow in each one of them! 

Hugs with love, EA

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Martie
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2004-11-04
10:47 AM
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Sy
You know I've been trying to get up off my down...your poem helped me do that. Thank you! 
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nakdthoughts
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2004-11-04
11:27 AM
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A pleasures treasure and a sigh It was a rainbow caught my eye
~~ And pleasure, yours, to share each day I come to read, enjoy your say~~
always love to read your flow, Sy
hugs M
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suthern
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2004-11-04
11:30 AM
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Your work is always excellent... but among all those gems, some shine with a special sparkle... this is one. *S*
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-11-04
12:01 PM
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Earth Angel LOL that would depend on who looks at them. Hugs.
Martie That's funny your reply did the same for me. 
Maureen, Always a pleasure to see your replies.
suthern As does your comment. 
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Janet Marie
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2004-11-04
12:37 PM
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The odor of a new moan glade A glade, a braid, a spirit maid ==============================
Sy, Sy, sweet cadenced Sy... what you do with a couplet of rhyme is a gift to time. I do so love the way your mind works in rhyme
*ww*  Poetry is emotion put into measure. The emotion comes by nature ... but the measure is acquired by art.
Thomas Hardy
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Seymour Tabin
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2004-11-04
01:04 PM
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JM, And I love the way your mind works in reply. Winkiewinkie 
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