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Windblown Eyebrows
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Windblown Eyebrows |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Windblown eyebrows Where living things Stand upright, somewhere else Still, with continued interest Rounding some strange effects Pouring Dripping wet compilations Grinning, deniably If only for a moment A day Or perhaps even “a lifetime” Searing smooth tapping on my window Primal hunger grows the man Wearing long concert lives Praying on bended knees Windblown eyebrows Where night things kayak elements Ocean bearing two seats Flexes loyal Flushed mindful sandals Pressed against a look back Nice weather flowing Pressing to skin Between convex souls Alerts heaven whispers Fables…early childhood entries Hanging imaginative Insomnia well done Teenage petals tickle Hundred dollar thoughts Mesmerized jade walks between your fingers Half curious colored bricks Seam where the night cools And the silence pours from your arms There, we say nothing but drive on Perception is the wind swept distance Between our hearts, staring out to sea Where you left Unimaginable fingers paged metamorphosis I was a verse of apparition Now the oil on skin juices and seeds Liking the difference Silk of mouth to mouth Like wings accountable Claims a corner of my secret flannel Yes, my love, I am a dreaming peasant No longer entertaining ideas Of life renting with you Yet, still my turnstile of passion Pours of voracious galleries Songwriting Calling, calling Colors, textures Gentle persuasion hands between my breasts Like a road to sacred passion Following windows dazzling reflection Because of you Watering eyes see what unwinding hinges Can bring Windblown Eyebrows I worry not of flash challenges And will love like that again Someday Someday When the threads of love Penetrate reasons to dream In two who think and feel alike You no longer have time for me Yet I am your doing, in fine moments A drifter of inspiration Taking snapshots of simple things To you a boaring life But, to me No longer a mute women I am different now You'd be surprised Old Blue turned up missing Now I know a 24 hour Renaissance Sweet intoxication, my diary the one you used to keep on a pedastal but threw away oh, it's ok You owned your reasons And went to where the music played My out of place cameo Now Collecting stamps Hello windblown eyebrows Wearing lip gloss Wondering at best With no explanation Simply forms opening reentry To Life Because of you Its been real |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
wow...what a rush of color and imagery! sweeping poem! **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I think you started a wirlwind, good morning sweet. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
when I go for rides, I just braid em first.. wink dug it ms Lee J |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
wow, LeeJ, listening to your heart pulse... I selected this part as a personal favorite, but the whole thing is wonderful, and so you. "Because of you Watering eyes see what unwinding hinges Can bring Windblown Eyebrows I worry not of flash challenges And will love like that again Someday Someday When the threads of love Penetrate reasons to dream" thank you for the brain exercise... K |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling)... winblown eyebrows..I just had to read... my own are unruly most of the time..lol.. quite the sweeping poem ma'am... nicely done... very nicely done |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Gee-Wilikers! How did I miss this one? What a great write Lee J. Please put a book together??? Please, Please?? You need to get all your writings out in public. Really!! JL  |
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