Whispers of a Pen (carried off into a sea of unrest)

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Open Poetry #34

Whispers of a Pen (carried off into a sea of unrest)

Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-11-03 11:33 PM

Whispers of a Pen (carried off into a sea of unrest)

unhealed wounds
of shredded souls
torn apart arbitrarilly
by a stone sword
extended with open arms
from a heart of ice
trimming the hedges
of my prime.
Yes i was cut down
but life goes on right?
continually flaunt
what could not be obtained
in pure malice
as these screams
are carried away
on the whispers
of a pen
into a white lined darkness
towards the sea of unrest
did life go on?
life proceeds
within the hearts of the loved
while those without
stand upon
stranded cliffs
in eternal jealousy
and hatred

(a confessional poem of sorts. i hope you all enjoy)

nice use of muffin

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-11-04 02:42 AM

Very interesting, and yes, I enjoyed the read, even its sadness.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2004-11-04 04:51 AM

Ouch. es confessional and painful, but god to get out I'm sure. Well said.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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