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A Day's Spent
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A Day's Spent |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Day's Spent I watched as they confronted one another in eyes I did for them what they couldn't do alone, letting their leaning bend me just a little, (too much one-sided) I felt impatience tense my thoughts while keeping the same silent I listenened to one's wishful complaints while meeting eyes with the other, whose twinkle showed she understood And when the day was over sharing results with one made it all worthwhile Although, I did miss you... in the waiting M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Although, I did miss you... in the waiting ======================== a bittersweet beauty poetess M... a touching closing. Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen As always, your words are so heartfelt. I hope all is well with you. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Maureen, You have such a style about your writing that causes me to read it slowly, seeping in feelings. This poem makes me appreciative of what good friends do for one and other. Your friend is fortunate to have a friend such as you. miscellanea |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you for reading~~ I spent election day with two of my Aunts, both of whom are in their upper 80's. They are always fun to watch and be with although one is "tougher" than the other... and by the end of the evening and all of the next day,I am down with an almost migraine... but it is stll worth it~~ smiling~~ M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Maureen, Isn't it interesting what is said and "how" others speak? This sounds like my grandmother and grandfather. She always bickered with the almost silent fella, but you knew they were in love, just the same. The eyes said it! Thanks for your response. It added to my understanding. miscellanea |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice to read you ma'am.... hope all is well with you..and that the headache has gone... |
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