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Inner or the Outer (light relief)
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Inner or the Outer (light relief) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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The inner or the outer, perhaps an inept me ineffectively attempting the time honoured maneuver of changing what is now into what is meant to be. Waylaid is the easy slide into home of many names until I’m gasping, groping, still not satisfied. I try from out, try from in, limp in flops and lies alongside the edge not centered in the middle and my gentle ministrations as if not there at all. Breathe in the angry vibes, breathe out the strength of lions, then grab all the dangling bits and shove it, shove it in. I did that yesterday, it works I’ll have you know, and the bed I made pleases me, at last it pleases me! ---------------------------------------- Just giving vent to the frustration of bed making in case you thought … ?? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Good thing this had a disclaimer, Helen...bedmaking can be quite...amusing...  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Agree with that. Makes you wish all beds were slipping bags. Throw yourself in, zip it and worry about it in the morning. Dave |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Gosh Helen....Bed making was never this fun for me!  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I thought you were going to write about belly buttons here cute write  |
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