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Ice Is Coming - Tanka
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Ice Is Coming - Tanka |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Ice is Coming ~ Tanka Sunbeam’s captured wink Even loss rejuvenates Tinted promises  Snow slick ice shall soon give trace Glinting lights reveal all tracks |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As all of the dying or dead little messengers lie on an earthen carpet...awaiting the ice to blanket them... Well done KJ, love the pic, so perfect. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Brrrrr - well done - yes, ice is just around the corner -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How perfectly you captured those sparks which will transform soon. Beautiful picture! I would love a lower temperature, we had an exceptionally hot October... Love, Margherita |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
OOh this is lovely and I can feel the chill of ice coming Karilea.. Well done. Mxx Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
After a record high of 75 degrees yesterday there most certainly is a chill in the air for the trick or treaters tonight. Well done and love the pic. ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Beautiful late autumn rhapsody. "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well you could fool me...here in FL it's in the 70s ...waiting for the cool air to come once again....waiting and waiting |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Snow slick ice shall soon give trace Glinting lights reveal all tracks" There is reason in the actions of snow revealing tracks, The logic of it all is to make us slow down in winter, observe better what has passed ...history is stopped, and we can study more clearly what has passed.....The brain is said to function best at 32 degrees, the same temperature that freezes time pictures in snow... I don't know exactly what these words mean, but this is what this poem said to me.... ----------ice/ford >< Come read to me some poem, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice... and good luck on the book... hope you hear something soon.. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, dear lady, you've done it again, while this takes my breath away, don't remind me about Ice and the long drives back and forth to work...hehehhehe Otherwise, letting go of those thoughts, this was most beautiful....hey, maybe, we'll have a mild winter? Yes? Enjoyed Luv Me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Excellent composition  and congrads on the book. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Color past it's prime naked arms whisper my name. A cold moon for light as I shuffle through frozen tears. Without you, I suffer. INclan |
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