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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-11-03 07:13 AM


Exploring vastness of character
Skeletal man providing barren stares
Of which choose to look elsewhere
Stripped naked, skin’s blanket purchasing air fair
I’ve wondered why shock waves fear nerves

My third eye clawing for some far off awning
Or when sea yellowed sponge grows dry
Musty old performers ebbing
To where will they depart?
While mopping up blood
Of their long gone deaths
Will we find more?

They’ve clipped our nails down to flesh
Talisman lay flopping like a waterless fish
Deafening noise spitting profanity through my screen
For tokens thrown from another balcony
In another theater, in another town
Curtain call pawns unearthly shadows
Wondering when the next slick will go down?
Chocking on molded heart of their bread

Remembering membranes of fiber, lodging close
And calling sound what it is
Where roads openly named
Allotting total admission, to well known places

Sitting at a round table of trusted knights
Horse’s armor immortalized with frozen sighs
Relaxing fists, peeling away hypnotizing shrieks of vultures
The ones with frozen eyes, picking bones, one morsel at a time

There is a rock chanting through our windows
Traveling a nomadic road, reaching with laced mists
Joining the viaducts of the world
In tomorrows face of death

Memory, like daylight, waxing escalating hours
And those hours will burn alive
The terms of their endearments
Commercial images disappear like an abducted child
Sharing our city with recovering addicts
Common sense will long cry
Get your own house in order!


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-11-03 07:30 AM


LeeJ
Good morning sweet, you're always a treat to read. Have a good one.

ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
2 posted 2004-11-03 11:32 AM


My home is in a clutter too
it partakes in my daily brew..

good write, enjoyed the reflections..


Soleil Noir
Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA
3 posted 2004-11-03 11:46 AM


Common sense will long cry
Get your own house in order!

~*~

It has to start there, doesn't it,
before there can be anyone to say,
"do it this way."

Excellent, Lee.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2005-01-26 06:53 PM


"There is a rock chanting through our windows
Traveling a nomadic road, reaching with laced mists
Joining the viaducts of the world
In tomorrows face of death"

Yeah!  Now that is a story.
Wonderful poetry Lee J.

JL



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