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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Windows of frost already on the cabin abundant find for those who retreat scale the ice on frozen meat tip of iceberg chilly winds alone? trip to artic north to carve a trail hoist a wind barrier, cope with hail ice pellets rain from up high shelf of ice protrudes glacier winds so rude alone? but for a loyal pet a husky canine carries load to abundant find at a chilly retreat sheer north, denied ice one meets. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-03-2004 10:58 AM).] |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love this piece. Gives me shrivers just thinking of the upcoming winter. :-) I been enjoying reading your poetry. :-) E.J. Within this heart you'll find love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You certainly have the chill cleverly built into this piece....I enjoyed the read. Eric |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
a few 'chilly' words adds the atmosphere  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
brrrrrr... I love how you worded this, it's fun to read. And I really like your new picture, it's COOL!!! K |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes...'tis the season...the fields were awash with ice crystals this morning...at 29 degrees, that was easy enough to see... Good morning, Martin. Wonderful poem! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Good Morning Kalil, Sunshine How is America after the elections..guess things back to normal :/ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Boy oh boy, I'm dreading the chilly weather on it's way...could someone please intercept it, perhaps talk it out of arriving this year??? hehe a marvelous read |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
that's it I've made up my mind to get back into a winter sport like skating...when the ice comes |
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