Open Poetry #34 |
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Requiem for Love (Lost within an uncaring world) |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going ![]() |
Under a stream of moonlight and half lit stars in a field of gray ambience love was laid to rest smothered by darkness spewed from adulterous and uncaring hearts murdered by numbed emotions and malnourished souls life has become lifeless radiant ruby roses a succulent sapphire sky brilliant pinks and vuluptous violets of sunsets smothered under gray overtones all color, all life is lost only to be preserved through ink in words of never ending descriptions and reverence of what was and will never be again for love has died (written after over hearing conversations of intimate conquests where love was over looked. I hope you all enjoy. thanks for the spelling of malnourished) nice use of muffin [This message has been edited by Don_Juan (11-02-2004 11:25 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
malnourished... The description post poem gave an even different canvas to look upon. Very well done. TD |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
The first stanza and this "of sunsets smothered under gray overtones" really got me. Excellent imagery. Painful, though, definitely a dulled and lonely ache. I like... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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