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wharf rat |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
a wharf rat climbed through my window down the bedpost across my pillow he nibbled on my rosy cheeks with his teensy little needle teeth then he massaged my sleeping skin until his weensy claws sank in the wharf rat unzipped his hair revealing a pink suit under there and he showed off his polished halo he was a handsome, charming male, oh but me thinks he was a mama’s boy and I could see right through his ploy he said he would change the sheets on my bed tidy my kitchen, paint the town red he promised to help eat my groceries handwash my undies and hoseries he’d be as quiet as a mouse if I’d just let him live in my house but he was a wharf rat, after all hiding behind roses and climbing walls gnawing on my telephone lines broken headlights were his eyes when I swept him out my door and he hissed like a steamy radiator the wharf rat had to go, you see and so I swept him down the street cuz even though that rat was sweet I knew he’d chase my sister’s feet |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehehehhe, enjoyed, adding, smart move! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes - very good Dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cute write...much enjoyed! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Cute write indeed! Will check my bed and pillow .... Brrrrr Love, Margherita  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's cute |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
very good my friend...great piece of humor here...much enjoyed. jwesley |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh this is so true... the rats have to go.. loved this! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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