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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-02-04 11:25 AM


Swift had created a surreal world
Hope of discovery
Entering a large gaze of Orpheous
Standing a part of me
Have I imagined you?
That step beyond
You brought surprise
In overflowing pockets
Undermining deranged hours
This will remain until the very end
And then live on~

In darkness you saw my hand
Providing excerpts I now own
An astonishing short novel
To short, though~
Became the opportunist
Love affair with a sister image
Waxed like Paolo & Dante reading together
The Dove

You were the message
That was read, aloud
To all my ghosts
Dying old is the mask of hostility
But dying young, a brave charity
Life became colors
Brightness knew my eyes
Harmonious informants
Now know my mind

You touched my face intimately
But impressions became
Attaining a happy life
Glide my love, glide
For you were indeed
Music of the Night
A new moral to learn
Combined with married spirit
Intentional joy, radiant innocence
Commencement of sensual liberations
Ones which look but do not touch
Robbing me of nothing
But giving oh so much

Thank you for being you!


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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2005-02-04 02:43 PM


nicely done - salute!

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-02-04 06:19 PM


Robbing me of nothing
But giving oh so much


nicely said

~smiling~
M

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3 posted 2005-02-04 06:59 PM


Beautifully written!

~Alli~

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