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Cheers! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Swift had created a surreal world Hope of discovery Entering a large gaze of Orpheous Standing a part of me Have I imagined you? That step beyond You brought surprise In overflowing pockets Undermining deranged hours This will remain until the very end And then live on~ In darkness you saw my hand Providing excerpts I now own An astonishing short novel To short, though~ Became the opportunist Love affair with a sister image Waxed like Paolo & Dante reading together The Dove You were the message That was read, aloud To all my ghosts Dying old is the mask of hostility But dying young, a brave charity Life became colors Brightness knew my eyes Harmonious informants Now know my mind You touched my face intimately But impressions became Attaining a happy life Glide my love, glide For you were indeed Music of the Night A new moral to learn Combined with married spirit Intentional joy, radiant innocence Commencement of sensual liberations Ones which look but do not touch Robbing me of nothing But giving oh so much Thank you for being you! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
nicely done - salute!  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Robbing me of nothing But giving oh so much nicely said ~smiling~ M |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautifully written! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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