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poe
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0 posted 2005-02-03 02:46 AM


Love is built not to forget
A love so strong that time itself holds no bearings
You could wish for rain
The sun would just keep on smiling
You could change it's name
Yet that feeling would still remain
Trying to drown it out
It beckons deep in your solice state
The flowers that have been planted keep growing
There is no straight answer
Crying out loud wanting what is not there
Pushing away what is right by your side
Confusion running a marathon in my head
They say it all works out in the end
Your name leaves my lips , but never my heart
Where do you go from here
No one can give me a straight answer
This crown of love I hold
Does not know where it should be placed
This is the hardest thing to do
Does one follow the heart
Or does one face regret everyday
Oh what a day it is
But it is just like the rest
In this bitter sweet november

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

© Copyright 2005 Poe Wilson - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-02-03 02:53 AM


yes, there is something about November
many poems are written about it

DavePage
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2 posted 2005-02-03 02:47 PM


Very good words.

Dave

pandonov
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3 posted 2005-02-04 11:33 AM


very nice
LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-02-04 11:37 AM


It is you who chooses...
What a profound way to say I love you
God bless and wishing you the best

miscellanea
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5 posted 2005-02-04 12:10 PM


Your words speak to me.  

Does one choose regret everyday?  Only if one wishes.  Perspectives can be changed.   Regardless, good memories will reside in part...

Enjoyed

misc'e

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2005-02-04 07:22 PM


Yes...as LeeJ said...what a profound way to say "I Love You".
TD

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