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Open Poetry #34

It Just Sounds Like Rain

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-02-12 02:14 PM

It Just Sounds Like Rain

one night we found ourselves along the edge
where I showed you secrets of places and things
little did I know you were practicing for another
heavily I wear a quiet river of those actions
and breathe the flowing grey heat of thunder
riding the red carpeted insiders guide to
distance on skies that are clearly not straight
paper protects me exposure from this silver storm
and in the quiet background there is no beat
but my pen gracefully leaks raindrops falling down
for in that once superficial touch scars pour deep

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-02-12 03:51 PM

keep pouring emotions...I'll keep hugging

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2005-02-12 04:00 PM

I prescribe a weekend of serenity--perhaps a little R&B, mimosas, and cheese & mushroom omelets.

I like this style on you, but save some "duckies", ladyslick, there's some other styles at a couple of boutiques I want you to see too. (The Funky Monkey & A-Ha on Magazine St.)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-02-12 05:07 PM

little did I know you were practicing for another

definitely stings...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2005-02-12 05:11 PM

WOW!....

Maree

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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