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| Open Poetry #34 |
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Valentine Past |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Valentine Past What else is left unsaid? You had that “Overwhelming” thought in your head… I simply stumbled into your life, I was not hunting with my muleskinner knife… There you were *splendor in the grass, in time Pulitzer Prize-winning actress, dressed to the nines… How could I resist you, your ruby-red lips? Your desire to explore, and more, in your rendering passionate script… Lightning flashes reflected off your big brown eyes As thunderstorms were building, whispering lies… Compulsion written on my mind as we danced in our mingled scents, Your breath warm and sweet, your skin fresh, smooth, passions adamant… Until rainy storms opened windows to cold rain, and west winds blew-in to restrain… The ways of youthful living day to day You and I were, somewhat, that way, those days of our past. That Valentine’s day . . . ................................ *Splendor in the Grass (1961) Director: Elia Kazan Playwright: William Inge |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
JL, I loved the way this flowed out. Those were the days, alright. Happy Valentine's Day on Tuesday.  ......jo |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
More writing to the pen JL. Dave |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked the flow too, I am big on that Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This sparkles with youth and unrestrained joy of love.... even if it's a memory of the past. Beautifully written. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"I simply stumbled into your life..." ~*~ Nostalgic smiles at this... grateful smiles to you. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a wondrous beauty |
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