Open Poetry #34 |
In my sleep |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
In my sleep Your breathing awakens my dreams A slow and steady assuredness Rhythmic in its sound Beating back the day into the night Breathe upon breath soothing me to sleep Soft melodies of sweet peace I drift into a fantasy land of hopes and promises Colors and sounds unlike any on earth All unlocked only when I sleep next to you My dearest dream maker in the night How I love your presence Each second of rest brings me a heavenly bliss The only fear I have tonight Will be to wake up Without you by my side By Thomas Goldsworthy |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You got this to perfection. Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
True coziness in this one. Beautifully rendered, dear Thomas. Love, Margherita |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Amazing write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Thank you I appreicate your comments they inspire me to write more. Tommy |
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