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Just Once |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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just to kiss you one time never have I wanted something like this to feel you breathe as you sleep i dream and thoughts of you keep me warm just one time to touch you hold you love you hopeing that just one time will turn into one more if for just one moment i could make you smile then maybe just one time will turn into many more ~~Kings' Angel~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sweet voice of your heart .... lovely! Hope you will succeed in making him smile ... Love, Margherita  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
longing well said... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nice - liked it Dave |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you all for the replies.... it came from my heart. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
A very touching write. It's refreshing to read your work. You really communicate your feelings well. I could feel the passion you felt as you wrote this. It was great reading and I will keep my eye out for more from you. I hope to see you posting. Your poetic friend, Kevin |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautifully expressed Felt the heart longing in every word Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I felt this |
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