Open Poetry #34 |
I remember. |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
tears are pouring out of my heart as i try and stop the rain from falling and my world from collapsing this coffee doesn't seem to be getting any warmer. i remember, the sun was out and the grass was weaved between my fingers you told me the sky was blue and i believed you but now it's grey with worries as i try and relax try and forget but.. i remember, my bed was soft and the covers were over our heads you told me that the world would collapse if we were ever apart and i believed you now my blankets are cold and my world is about to disappear. i remember, the stars were bright and your hands were aroud my waist like a life jacket and you told me you loved me and i believed you now i'm drowning. [This message has been edited by exhale (11-16-2004 12:35 AM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This is so sad but so well expressed. I don't know why we're blessed with a memory because remembering can hurt so much for a long, long, time. Still, we're stuck with it ... until we let it go. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand so well |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
A crushing reminder of the trials of love. Fear not. Love will find a way. For all it's tears and all it's laughter and all it's work you'll know it's there when it doesn't walk away. Through all storms it rides, carrying you on it's tide. Love itself will be your life jacket (given and received). "Faith, Hope, and Love, and the greatest of these is Love." Keep your head up high. The only one deserving of your love is the one who love's through actions not words. Great poem. I have missed your writng while I have been on hiatus busy with my crazy life. Warm regards always, Kevin |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
thank you all. it's always wonderfull to hear from you again kevin,thank you for your lovely reply,i adore you for it i expect to hear allll about your crazy life lol. |
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