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JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2004-10-28 06:20 PM



Caught in the middle
divided soul
please help me
i need to be whole
one way or the other
it's getting hard to breathe
caught in the undertow
a heart transformed
turned inside out
the wise man spoke
i heard him say
"please have no doubt
and do not fear
have faith sweetheart
and soon all will be clear"

~~Kings' Angel~~

© Copyright 2004 Julie Ann Ferrer - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-10-28 06:47 PM


And the wise man whispered " you are whole, you just need to be aware of this truth " ...

Love the presence of trust here.

All will be clear, yes.

Love, Margherita  


JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
2 posted 2004-10-29 02:03 PM


It's hard to tell sometimes...
Thanx...

Kevo
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since 2004-06-02
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Navarro County, Texas, USA
3 posted 2004-11-16 01:35 AM


Stumbled onto this one.  Glad I did.  Refreshing, precious little bit of writing from one with great talent.  Well written.  your feelings were well conveyed.  Love is a testy thing...a team sport.  Always where you'd lest expect it.  Thanks for the gift of your words here.  I'm off to find another of your posts.

Warm regards and well done!

Kevin

Cathie Arnold
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SC
4 posted 2004-11-16 01:44 AM


A very nice write!!!
T McCoy
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5 posted 2004-11-26 10:42 PM


I certainly hope things have worked out for you...they usually always do...just stay positive Julie.  
You always did write with such emotion...

T

*Alli4000*
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6 posted 2004-11-26 11:55 PM


Wow Julie! Great write....

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
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in your dreams
7 posted 2004-11-27 12:10 PM


follow your heart,
and love will lead you.

Angel4aKing
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8 posted 2006-10-28 03:26 PM


Thank you all, you are all so sweet. As for things working out for me as long as I am always moving forward I can't lose!   Thanx again. By the way T this is my new login I lost my password and can't get a reply to get it.

AK

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