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The Smell Of Pine
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The Smell Of Pine |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I saw the slow trail of crumbs fall before your eyes with each swish of sheer to here I was aware of every "innocent" stare in the barely there of fruit tree offer that tripped easily from her fingertips did I not witness the hollow grumble from the follow of your eyes down violin curve of back and while yet you were there my own eyes caught unaware the silent stare of another's forbidden hunger and the smell of pine... ~tier  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What poet hasn't known a moment just like this? You even made this one smell good amongst the betrayal... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
written well, the reader feels this very deeply... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiers~  at this absolutely beautiful piece~*Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and what a smell it is |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A wonderful write here, Tiersdin! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
brilliant !! hugs, Chris |
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