The Curve of Mist .... a dance w/edder

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Open Poetry #34

The Curve of Mist .... a dance w/edder

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-02-10 10:40 PM

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-02-10 11:36 PM

bathing in the beauty of this - exquisite work you two -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2005-02-11 02:11 AM

Oh my, this is quite warm..!
Very nice...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-02-11 04:00 AM

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-02-11 07:11 AM

what a duet
you two doit
kewl

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2005-02-11 11:50 AM

forevermoment...

When one word is a poem, the whole has to be superb... and this is. *S* Beautiful work!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2005-02-11 11:29 PM

LadySnow~
Breathless word-beauty~

I am taking the liberty of sending this one to a dear, dear friend that used to post here, Doreen Peri ... and sending your web site too~
If you two haven't met ... you should~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

7 posted 2005-02-12 06:00 AM

You two are so obviously perfect together. Bravo!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-02-12 06:01 PM

I love your poetry.

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2005-02-12 07:39 PM

Great duet. Makes me think of an intoxicating aroma!

......jo

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

10 posted 2005-02-12 08:17 PM

sensually seductive

-Bob

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

11 posted 2005-02-13 11:56 AM

Bump!