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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-02-10 10:40 PM



"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2005-02-10 11:36 PM


bathing in the beauty of this - exquisite work you two -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

GG
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Lost in thought
2 posted 2005-02-11 02:11 AM


Oh my, this is quite warm..!
Very nice...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-02-11 07:11 AM


what a duet
you two doit
kewl

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5 posted 2005-02-11 11:50 AM


forevermoment...

When one word is a poem, the whole has to be superb... and this is. *S* Beautiful work!

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6 posted 2005-02-11 11:29 PM


LadySnow~
Breathless word-beauty~

I am taking the liberty of sending this one to a dear, dear friend that used to post here, Doreen Peri ... and sending your web site too~
If you two haven't met ... you should~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

EvocativeVerse2
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7 posted 2005-02-12 06:00 AM


You two are so obviously perfect together. Bravo!
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8 posted 2005-02-12 06:01 PM


I love your poetry.

~Alli~

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iliana
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9 posted 2005-02-12 07:39 PM


Great duet.  Makes me think of an intoxicating aroma!   ......jo
Lighthousebob
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10 posted 2005-02-12 08:17 PM


sensually seductive

-Bob

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11 posted 2005-02-13 11:56 AM


Bump!
*Alli4000*
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12 posted 2005-02-13 07:30 PM


Great write you two!

~Alli~

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