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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-02-10 06:31 PM

Bending Life Your Way

I delay my timing
to cancel out fear
a stranger once, no more.
I never knew how close the near,
a mystery of then, before.

I'm soft of hazel, pierced by blue
Blinded bending trailed towards you...

A slide show moment
held in these hands
a flush of feelings to rise.
What lies beneath of life's demands
to control these whispered sighs.

Pierced by blue, I'm hazel hushed
Bending blindly towards you, blushed ...

Unlock the door of promised sleep.
Forget-Me-Not in dreams to keep.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-11-2005 05:36 AM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2005-02-10 07:34 PM

M,
I don't recognize that style from you, but I have been pretty absent of late. But may I say how much I love it, 'cause I do. Very nice. All that history and still...that's what I like about you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2005-02-10 09:34 PM

Maureen, my friend, this is so beautiful. I know how you feel. I miss not chatting with you. Hope you are okay!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2005-02-10 09:41 PM

nakdthoughts,
   Absolutely beautiful flow of words and thought!  So alliterative...

  "I'm soft of hazel, pierced by blue
Blinded bending trailed towards you..."

Although I quoted this, the entire poem should be pasted here!  Love it.  to the library!

           misc'e

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-11 03:55 AM

awesome

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2005-02-11 04:20 AM

Love the flow of this... and these lines:

"I'm soft of hazel, pierced by blue
Blinded bending trailed towards you..."

are just awesome. Enjoyed reading this...
Hope things are well for you.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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