Open Poetry #34 |
tip toe liquor |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
tip toe puts on her pretty like a chain link guitar my face has tattoos from the slow dance dreams she made from useless love songs she says my shirt fits her fine with loving gloves if the buttons are gone and just the ends are tied barely there sharing a sunburn place waiting for the chance of shadows to be tanless manned but not manless tanned and my hands are her fine wine unless they bring all of me along to be her spirit's hard liquor ________________ dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-10-2005 07:11 PM).] |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
Smooooth.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I had to play, Joni Mitchelle's, Case Of You...what a song...nice poem too!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmm - long cool drink of yummie - D - love your spirits - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kitty thanks for the whisper ms martie, mmm thanks lil neighbor lady suzz glad you like it babe, gently D |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
with magician ease her hard-earned twelve step charm disappeared in a flutter of fingers only to emerge with jack speed from between his lips, where she drank deep. Indigo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
indi your dances dazzle like the warm of the slipknot round the wrist that shivers to be captive thank you lady friend pretty shadows, you have such a cute little face, thank you for letting it sit here for a bit |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this made me feel like Christine, with the Phantom's arms not to tightly around me...and then some...beautiful charisma in this |
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