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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-02-10 06:08 PM


tip toe puts on her pretty
like a chain link guitar
my face has tattoos
from the slow dance dreams
she made from useless love songs

she says my shirt fits her fine
with loving gloves
if the buttons are gone
and just the ends are tied
barely there sharing

a sunburn place waiting
for the chance of shadows
to be tanless manned
but not manless tanned
and my hands are her fine wine
unless they bring all of me along

to be her spirit's hard liquor


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Catrina
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1 posted 2005-02-10 07:20 PM



Smooooth....

Martie
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2 posted 2005-02-10 07:56 PM


DS

I had to play, Joni Mitchelle's, Case Of You...what a song...nice poem too!!

Susan
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3 posted 2005-02-10 08:39 PM


Mmmm - long cool drink of yummie - D - love your spirits -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-02-10 10:21 PM


ms kitty thanks for the whisper


ms martie, mmm thanks lil neighbor lady


suzz glad you like it babe, gently D

Indigo
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5 posted 2005-02-11 03:42 AM


with magician ease
her hard-earned twelve step charm
disappeared in a flutter of fingers
only to emerge
with jack speed
from between his lips,
where she drank deep.

Indigo

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6 posted 2005-02-11 03:59 AM



Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-02-11 06:56 AM


indi

your dances dazzle
like the warm of the slipknot
round the wrist
that shivers to be captive

thank you lady friend
pretty shadows, you have such a cute little face, thank you for letting it sit here for a bit



LeeJ
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8 posted 2005-02-11 10:33 AM


this made me feel like Christine, with the Phantom's arms not to tightly around me...and then some...beautiful charisma in this
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