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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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down off the 95 there behind the haden on summer afternoons they come to stretch their bulges and fill their eyes with hems and skin and harley tin at the inn that the locals named soothedsinz tattoo'd man does the handlebars behind the bar steering the kegs to belly bust laughter and rakes in some coins when a passer by wants an order of vietnamese 8 on the table in back or maybe some nickle nine from a tight rack gypsy and yes she is at least maybe 9.9 wearing that hem and lean over grin too tall for the stairs but they do stare when she serves the bulges dripping her special dressing _______________ dark scribblenote: the "inn" has no posted name but it does have the coldest beer in idaho, bulge burgers are a full meal deal that make the arteries hard, vietnamese 8 is a form of pool on a table without pockets and nickle nine is 9 ball for $5 per ball..etc etc.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Enjoyed this, sounds like a place to kick back and enjoy life. Enjoyed the scribble note too.  sleepy morning hugs to you..... choose to chance the rapids, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like a feast i'd like to be served on good morning out there  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I like the scribble notes as much as the poetry itself...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the early pretties make me smile thanks to you GS, ms inky and sunshine for the waves. and sunshine..the scribblenotes help me remember where I was and how I go there ....hugs ladies1 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we used to have bunches of these places way back when, you rode your Harley, I rode my horse, and along the way would pick up a bunch of riders...we'd ride all day, stop for a few, play some pool...great steak sandwhiches...one was called the Elephant Hotel....and is still there. Thanks for the memories. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I guess you can find the neat places in life when you ride maybe I should go borrow my brother's Harley |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmm - would like to hang there and see the colors of living - maybe serve up some smiles on a platter of artery heaven and wink at the bartender - Enjoyed the weave of this -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
with hems and skin and harley tin Is that kinda like 'snips and snails and puppydog tails?' ;-) You paint my eyes with tobacco rain and my heart with bad girl blue when you write like this, D. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lee j, thanks lady friend, yep it is kind of a throwback to the good ol day dream places _______________ ps, let some scooter skin take you for a ride so you can just hang on and enjoy..thanks for your eyes on my ink _____________ susin, got your chaps? and your hongries? and a whole lot of time...they serve slow I hear..thanks hon for the read and smilez _________________ indi, you shimmer pretty with the comtimplation and cook some smile sides with your replies, thank you for the early wave |
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