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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Animal fingers far out-stretched nightly call over adopted clutches offered moth treats from under a hat what fear unleased from cavern bats. Tenacity at low guided flights echos raised from cavern heights associated with black caped swoops Gotham City reporters covered scoops the creature became one with hair one would invite winged mice there? Those fingers tapered into wings supported nightly membrane guided swings tied knots in straight hair masses exposed heads raised landing chances. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-11-2005 02:32 AM).] |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like it and the subtle bits. Dave |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
tied knots in straight hair masses since a young child I have had a fear of bats..and in the last few years I have a visitor at least once every summer... not a pretty sight ( me ) when they invade  M |
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