Moonlit Rhapsody (valentines challenge)

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Open Poetry #34

Moonlit Rhapsody (valentines challenge)

Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2005-02-09 10:34 PM

Moonlit rhapsody
plays aomng silver
silk glowing shadows
these realities
flying about
fatigued eyelids
fade, giving way
to longing fantasies.
more than emotion
that cool breeze
playing across
springing tree buds
and there she stood
bathed in moonlight
smile glowing
her eyes like diamonds
shimmering, intoxicating
and that aura
drew me in
blinded by beauty
attracted in passion
we danced
palm to palm
hip to hip
in beat
with fluttering wings
of over head birds
(blue in nature
but full spectrum
while in flight.)
and whistling branches
laughter abounds
as this world
of pure imagination
deteriorates to
a bland city scape
bringing to an
end my own
valentines mystery
(leave,
tantalize me no longer.)

(I wrote this while listening to a song by the name of "dancin in the Moonlight." I hope this meets the criteria of the challenge and also hope that you all enjoy it.)

nice use of muffin

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