Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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2005-02-09
01:05 PM
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I see butterfly smiles when thoughts entered, recalling heart spills
and the sun lit up these overcast skies
you taught me the reason and wonders of why.
Breezes call....
these wings feel stronger than they have in daze when your shine lighted the day.
{for Suzie... }choose to chance the rapids, dare to dance the tides... {Garth}
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2005-02-09
01:09 PM
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So beautiful and delicate, dear Donna!
Love, Margherita
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2005-02-09
01:11 PM
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Penned with the gentlest touch...lovely. Hugs~NancyIn the midst of winter, I found there lives within me.. an invincible summer.
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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
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2005-02-09
01:30 PM
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Such a sweet write, Donna! I love the use of butterflys in poetry. ....jo
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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
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2005-02-09
01:46 PM
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There ya go, Donna. You did it!
(but you really have Serenity and Wranx to thank for the writing)
This is lovely and YOU have lit my snowy day here in Buffalo with your beautiful writing and your bright smile. Thank you, Donna . . . I am quite honored.
*smile*
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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2005-02-09
08:09 PM
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Lovely penning of gift for a friend -
SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .
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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
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2005-02-09
08:20 PM
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This was so pretty my friend.
jwesley
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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posted
2005-02-09
08:24 PM
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I read this earlier... I'm proud of both of you...
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
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2005-02-09
10:44 PM
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she has a way that she does nice very nice
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2005-02-09
11:21 PM
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Donna, may both you a Littlewing continue to shine on!
Linda P.S. It's great to see your charming smile!
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2005-02-10
02:08 AM
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awesome
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Greeneyes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind
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posted
2005-02-10
08:23 AM
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beautiful Donna....
and Sue...you do shine....hugssss dear miss seeing you here!
~~*~~ the wind sings with the calm tranquilize in the night sien beauty on my lips ~~**~~
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