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Your Shine (for Suzie)
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Your Shine (for Suzie) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I see butterfly smiles when thoughts entered, recalling heart spills and the sun lit up these overcast skies you taught me the reason and wonders of why. Breezes call.... these wings feel stronger than they have in daze when your shine lighted the day. {for Suzie...  }choose to chance the rapids, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So beautiful and delicate, dear Donna! Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Penned with the gentlest touch...lovely. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Such a sweet write, Donna! I love the use of butterflys in poetry.  ....jo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
There ya go, Donna. You did it! (but you really have Serenity and Wranx to thank for the writing) This is lovely and YOU have lit my snowy day here in Buffalo with your beautiful writing and your bright smile. Thank you, Donna . . . I am quite honored. *smile* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Lovely penning of gift for a friend -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This was so pretty my friend. jwesley |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this earlier... I'm proud of both of you... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
she has a way that she does nice very nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, may both you a Littlewing continue to shine on!   Linda P.S. It's great to see your charming smile! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful Donna....  and Sue...you do shine....hugssss dear miss seeing you here! ~~*~~ |
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