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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2005-02-09 01:05 PM


I see butterfly smiles
when thoughts entered,
recalling heart spills

and the sun lit up
these overcast skies

you taught me the reason
and wonders of why.


Breezes call....

these wings feel stronger
than they have in daze
when your shine
lighted the day.


{for Suzie... }

choose to chance the rapids,
dare to dance the tides...
{Garth}

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-02-09 01:09 PM


So beautiful and delicate, dear Donna!

Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-02-09 01:11 PM


Penned with the gentlest touch...lovely.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2005-02-09 01:30 PM


Such a sweet write, Donna!  I love the use of butterflys in poetry.   ....jo
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2005-02-09 01:46 PM


There ya go, Donna.  You did it!

(but you really have Serenity and Wranx to thank for the writing)

This is lovely and YOU have lit my snowy day here in Buffalo with your beautiful writing and your bright smile.  
Thank you, Donna . . . I am quite honored.

*smile*

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-02-09 08:09 PM


Lovely penning of gift for a friend -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2005-02-09 08:20 PM


This was so pretty my friend.

jwesley

Sunshine
Administrator
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2005-02-09 08:24 PM


I read this earlier...
I'm proud of both of you...


inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
8 posted 2005-02-09 10:44 PM


she has a way
that she does
nice very nice

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2005-02-09 11:21 PM


Donna, may both you a Littlewing continue to shine on!

Flowers & Butterfly Butterfly 2


Linda
P.S. It's great to see your charming smile!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
10 posted 2005-02-10 02:08 AM


awesome
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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
11 posted 2005-02-10 08:23 AM


beautiful Donna....

and Sue...you do shine....hugssss dear miss seeing you here!


~~*~~
the wind sings with the calm
tranquilize in the night
sien beauty on my lips
~~**~~

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