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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2005-02-09 12:00 PM


Is what I cannot reach, there within your mind?
Sensation?
Tranquil?
Orange passion
Tailors of rose-colored tones
Teasing mouth advocate
Lit with powerful deepness
Licking my soul
Is Love’s apprentice
Soon forgotten
Twins in the beauty of life
Through struggles of injustice
Dawn of questions loom
What reflects the world around us?
Building daily liquid monsoon
In an unsleeping mind
Sometimes it howls
Wafting pieces where fingers outline
The moon
Driving out on spectral roads
This immensity towers above
Sweating positive anodes
Like autumn’s blazing octaves
Dare I stir this canopy of green?
Wrapped in morning shine
Which kisses me passionately?
In the cocoon of your neckline
Which sleeps like warmth?
Once a butterfly
Now a Eurasian twining shrub
Craving white pebbles of potpourri
A Norwegian cruise of fantasy
Are we a we
On a party line of Ouija


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Red Dreams
Member
since 2005-01-09
Posts 90
massachusetts
1 posted 2005-02-09 02:27 PM


it can be picked up and flipped through like a rich novel, teasing the senses with it's interwoven mystery
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2005-02-10 01:52 PM


“Building daily liquid monsoon
In an unsleeping mind
Sometimes it howls”

Very interesting write, Lee J.
Enjoyed this visit from your vast knowledge
Through the art of poetry!
Very nice.

JL

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