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choshi
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0 posted 2005-02-09 10:02 AM


In dreams,
we have carressed countless times
this cold winter night-
mixed with the sound of raindrops;
your soft sighs linger.

~P

© Copyright 2005 Paul C. Cooper - All Rights Reserved
GG
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1 posted 2005-02-09 10:06 AM


Sounds like they are good dreams.

Very nice...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-02-09 10:50 AM


a beautiful scene
choshi
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3 posted 2005-02-09 11:13 AM


Thank you Dixie   ~P
choshi
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4 posted 2005-02-09 11:14 AM


Thank you Alyssa,

Very good dreams, until reality creeps in...   ~P

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-02-09 05:11 PM


Enjoyed...James
iliana
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6 posted 2005-02-09 05:13 PM


Warm in the cold.....loved it, Paul.   ....jo
Margherita
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7 posted 2005-02-09 05:44 PM


Beautiful winter atmosphere!

Delicate and romantic.

Love, Margherita

choshi
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8 posted 2005-02-09 05:51 PM


Thank you James, glad that you enjoyed....~P
choshi
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9 posted 2005-02-09 05:53 PM


Thank you ~Jo,
choshi
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10 posted 2005-02-09 05:54 PM


Thank you Margherita, glad you enjoyed....warm wishes  ~P
inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2005-02-09 10:24 PM


the rain plays
like a lovers ballad
dreams stay on the
pillow a bit longer

choshi
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12 posted 2005-02-10 08:45 AM


the rain plays
like a lovers ballad
dreams stay on the
pillow a bit longer

Rains fall from clouds
as do dreams from my pillow
between night and day-
moments become lifeimes passing;
this wide-awake dream called life.

Sunshine
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13 posted 2005-02-10 09:13 AM



Such a delicate touch...

choshi
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14 posted 2005-02-10 09:15 AM


Thank you ...    Back ...    ~P
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15 posted 2005-02-10 10:09 AM


be back again later today to read this gem again
choshi
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16 posted 2005-02-10 11:10 AM


"be back again later today to read this gem again"

Thank you Kacy, and know that you will be welcome back with open arms   ~P

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17 posted 2005-02-11 11:40 AM


How very beautiful... I want a dream like that... yes! *S*
choshi
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18 posted 2005-02-11 12:02 PM


Thank you,  Yes, to dream like this, don't we all..... ~P
J. K. Mitchell
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19 posted 2005-02-12 03:48 PM


You make me remember when...
choshi
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20 posted 2005-02-12 04:59 PM


Thank you J.K.......is that bittersweet?

  ~P

Dark Angel
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21 posted 2005-02-12 05:15 PM


Mmmm this is nice.

Enjoyed.

Maree

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

choshi
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22 posted 2005-02-12 05:24 PM


Thank you Maree, glad you enjoyed
Kazm
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23 posted 2005-02-12 06:44 PM


I am trying these but it is almost hopeless. I do so badly I can't post them. I do like to read them, so I always look for yours.

                                                 Kaz

choshi
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24 posted 2005-02-14 10:12 AM


I am trying these but it is almost hopeless. I do so badly I can't post them. I do like to read them, so I always look for yours.
                                                 Kaz

Dear Kaz,  Thank you...Why not give it a try. It was not that long ago, that I did not have a clue.....Warm wishes   ~P

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