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cosmic groove |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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I think of you in twilight hues of sapphire and tanzanite swirl you’re the slow slip touch of the setting sun lingering in amber pools Evening shimmers its misted kisses welcoming your lunar come love you bring to me star shine dreams from far flung galaxies above Within your arms you glide me forth upon cosmic floors to groove we waltz our hearts in slip stream flow into this heavenly sphere of two s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you my friend - appreciate your kindness - was feeling rather fluffy of mind and mood - happy thoughts  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done here |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
*s* I'd respond to your poem but I'm still being swept away in a thought of love. Thanks |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmmmmmmmm damn I wanna be groove goobered by you (grin) enjoyed this suzz can see your heart your man is blessed |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you for your replies, my friends - am glad you enjoyed p.s. - thanks dear dixie soul fisher - glad you could be swept away with my stardust and moonshine melody dark - slip into my groove and we'll dance the cosmos away  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I sure love the cosmic touch of this love poem! Very captivating! Love, Margherita |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
paint for me star dust rhyme...love it |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
A tongue of magic. Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Margherita - thanks for your captivating EV2 - got brush and palette in hand - thanks bud Dave - it's all that chocolate - works the magic - thanks for your kindness Hugs all - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Bumping this back to the top...because I like it and am not ready to let it go! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ummmmmmm....nice one, Susan! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Kevin - you make me smile, thank you my friend. Jo - thanks dear - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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