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Soulfisher
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0 posted 2005-02-07 08:22 PM


Oh but for my love of snow
to fall upon your scattered self
to kick my legs with flying arms,
a rhythm of passion found soaring amongst
leaving lasting impression
of angel, you
And I
I will watch in humble admiration
as you dance in rare form
across the playing fields of our minds
in a seemingly effortles
stroke of brush
your flutter and fall
as a gentle you
melts away us all

so here is your poem
lay claim to the fame
in your name
(will the real BOB
please come forward)
and be known also in name
as my friend. wink wink

[This message has been edited by Soulfisher (02-07-2005 09:03 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2005-02-07 08:51 PM


Very cute poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Snow
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2 posted 2005-02-07 09:46 PM



you don't play fair. LMAO!!!

bob


~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2005-02-07 10:23 PM


I know a BOB...
smart little write.
TD

Susan
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4 posted 2005-02-07 10:38 PM


I know BOB too - you do her honor - she is a gifted poetess -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Soulfisher
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5 posted 2005-02-08 12:53 PM


Lmao Im sorry but I dont have my secret decoder ring on me their bob snow.
This diamond its good to see you sparkle upon this page of blue.
Susan thank you for reading and replying to my thoughts on bob.
I think we all can agree that she makes for a cute little burro (for a biter).ouch! hey! stop that you!!  

GG
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6 posted 2005-02-08 03:35 AM


lol this is cute...
great writing mixed with some gool ol' fashion
embrassment for someone else.
Gotta love that!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Soulfisher
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where ever the fly fishing is good
7 posted 2005-02-08 03:46 AM


The_loner_23 cute. ? why yes you are my dear oh and gg I guess your next.
See this is what happens when you wont tell me your name.I name you bob and write a poem about you. Thanks for being such a good sport about it snow.Hope you liked my little snow angel of you.

[This message has been edited by Soulfisher (02-08-2005 06:53 AM).]

iliana
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8 posted 2005-02-08 09:48 PM


I knew immediately this was about Snow!  Enjoyed the write.   ...jo
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9 posted 2005-02-08 11:23 PM


very sweet!

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10 posted 2005-02-08 11:27 PM


LOL

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