Open Poetry #34 |
To the one I'll call BOB |
Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Oh but for my love of snow to fall upon your scattered self to kick my legs with flying arms, a rhythm of passion found soaring amongst leaving lasting impression of angel, you And I I will watch in humble admiration as you dance in rare form across the playing fields of our minds in a seemingly effortles stroke of brush your flutter and fall as a gentle you melts away us all so here is your poem lay claim to the fame in your name (will the real BOB please come forward) and be known also in name as my friend. wink wink [This message has been edited by Soulfisher (02-07-2005 09:03 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very cute poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
you don't play fair. LMAO!!! bob ~~~~~~~ "so I wait for you like a lonely house till you will see me again and live in me. Till then my windows ache" ~neruda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I know a BOB... smart little write. TD |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I know BOB too - you do her honor - she is a gifted poetess - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Lmao Im sorry but I dont have my secret decoder ring on me their bob snow. This diamond its good to see you sparkle upon this page of blue. Susan thank you for reading and replying to my thoughts on bob. I think we all can agree that she makes for a cute little burro (for a biter).ouch! hey! stop that you!! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
lol this is cute... great writing mixed with some gool ol' fashion embrassment for someone else. Gotta love that! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
The_loner_23 cute. ? why yes you are my dear oh and gg I guess your next. See this is what happens when you wont tell me your name.I name you bob and write a poem about you. Thanks for being such a good sport about it snow.Hope you liked my little snow angel of you. [This message has been edited by Soulfisher (02-08-2005 06:53 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I knew immediately this was about Snow! Enjoyed the write. ...jo |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very sweet! ~~*~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL |
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