Open Poetry #34 |
If I could write a Valentine what would I say |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I have no objection to people trying to make a fast buck but to claim one day instead of a year is nonsense and marketing blurb. If you love someone you love them for more than one day but I can understand the site trying to earn from it. Dave If I could write a Valentine If I could write a Valentine what would I say Phone bill been paid Is this just your day What happens tomorrow I've done this day Can I forget you now I've paid my way Were I married to you for only a day Do I disregard you So you go away To be told on one day You mattered for a day When I have a year Alone to enjoy Why on one day should love Have come to stay And the year has nothing to hold dear Why should money to enjoy the year Be paid So love can be so dear Do you remember one night a year Was I so poor And never so dear Why do flowers never flow now Because they get stolen For love of another Like roses flowing throughout the year There is a prick Of what holds dear And dying for one night Is a glorious trip I prefer a year To make my half flip |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Dave I truly agree love should be all year round not just one day and besides if you read my humorous valentine the other day ... like I said cupid keeps missing me LOL Hope |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
And dying for one night Is a glorious trip I prefer a year To make my half flip exactly Dave. Enjoyed your thoughts. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there are some romantics out there who show love all year long I have faith in that |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Well done Dave!! JL |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, Dave, my thoughts exactly but it's still nice to receive a Valentine's day card - I can still remember that far back. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, Dave, my thoughts exactly but it's still nice to receive a Valentine's day card - I can still remember that far back. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love is neverending only when one wants it to end. I enjoyed this read. Happy Valentine's Day my friend. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Exactly! .......jo |
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