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Open Poetry #34

It Takes Time

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-10-28 11:29 AM

You say
It's all in the game,
When I say your name,
In my heart,
It's always been you
From the start.
And you said so much to me,
Now Iam here
All alone,
Feeling so lost and
Tears are in emtion,
I know,
It takes time,
For me to realize,
That we are have been
through the time,
And after all these years,
Where our eyes met,
Became a memory
A memory that is on my heart,
Knowing you are gone,
Still takes time,
For me to realise
How love came to me?
And took you away
From me,
It takes time...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-10-28 11:56 AM

"A memory that is on my heart,"

lovely writing

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-10-28 11:58 AM

beautifully sad....sadly beautiful

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2004-10-28 12:25 PM

Beautifullly written of love forever etched in the heart

Hope

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-10-28 04:22 PM

Melancholic, but "It takes time" contains the spark of hope.

Lovely.

Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-10-28 08:22 PM

Enjoyed...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-10-28 08:30 PM

Yes, it does take time Vandana..
~Heart Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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