Remembering Dawn (Masquerade Challenge)

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Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2004-10-27 07:29 PM

And the time will come
of cold mornings and snow

I will remember
the summer dew that left
our feet wet
and the bay view from the windows
now boarded for the long journey
ahead

This is the way of all things
a simple faith
until the light of morning finds us
watching dawn break upon the
lake

My memories of you there
standing in the window
will hold a velvet calm until
the smell of lavender
will once again blow on the spring breeze

rebirthing my heart
to a new world
~
(my perception of this beautifully talented poet)

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2004-10-27 07:32 PM

Martie is coming to mind, Lauren
My God, this is beautiful.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-10-27 07:38 PM

Your perception is absolutely stunning - lovely.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-10-27 07:45 PM

So many wonderful poets to pull from, Lauren...

your mask is beautiful, and I cannot wait
until you reveal the poet...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2004-10-27 08:00 PM

Could possibly be our Enchantress?

What/whichever.....either way, it is
a very beautifully written poem.

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

5 posted 2004-10-27 08:06 PM

Well, I'm uncertain too, but as Enchantress did you and was so well guessed, I think I'll go with Enchantress as well. (Altho' she often has a bit more lost love in hers.) Nice writing. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Gentle Spirit
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Posts 13989

6 posted 2004-10-27 08:34 PM

I would say this has a certain Enchanting quality to this hon....regardless of who...you sure have donned someones mask beautifully!!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

7 posted 2004-10-27 08:50 PM

After a careful read of this gem, I think this a wonderful masquerade of Enchantress. Well done Laure.

believe in what your heart feels...

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

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Moved from a shack to a barn

8 posted 2004-10-27 10:38 PM

A beauty...and I have a couple ideas

Very nice costume, whoever it turns out to be

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

9 posted 2004-10-27 11:18 PM

beautiful....and calming.....

but i dont know who's mask this is

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-10-28 12:56 PM

Oh my Lauren...this is SO beautiful!
Love ya lady~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

passing shadows
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displaced

11 posted 2004-10-28 02:42 PM

sounds like you

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

12 posted 2004-10-28 04:01 PM

Kaoru? IndigoEve?

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

13 posted 2004-10-28 04:12 PM

Absolutely lovely work here Lauren, could it be Inked?

Mxx

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

Paula Finn
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missouri

14 posted 2004-10-28 04:19 PM

I can't even begin to guess..but it is lovely

DavePage
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15 posted 2004-10-28 04:33 PM

Winter arrives

Early

With our lack of knowledge for our senses
To see the sense
Of what we do

Like all in faith
We rejoice in
The world's protection

To acknowledge
That we felt we controlled
Realised we didn't
And then realised we did

And the world dies for our actions
As the lake dries

My memories of you there
standing in the window
will hold a velvet calm until
the smell of lavender
will once again blow on the spring breeze

rebirthing my heart
to a new world
~
As the world dies

My perception of an American President
(my perception of this beautifully talented poet)

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

16 posted 2004-10-28 04:41 PM

Before reading the other poets' opinions, I also thought it was our beautiful Enchantress glowing through your wonderful words.

So very well done!

Love, Margherita

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

17 posted 2004-10-28 06:07 PM

I still think it's inkedgoddess

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

18 posted 2004-10-28 06:53 PM

Well she loves fairies**

yes indeed this is our Pretty Lady Nancy....

hugssssss

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

19 posted 2004-10-28 07:38 PM

Lauren, I cannot tell you how flattered you have made me feel!

To have someone who writes with your eloquence and grace portray me...
I am indeed honored.

I wondered when I read about 'the bay', but then,
there are so many excellent writers here,
I wasn't positive.

You have made my week!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much lovely lady~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

20 posted 2004-10-28 08:19 PM

Luscious...James

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

21 posted 2004-10-28 08:56 PM

Nancy~

your poem awhile back about the bay has stuck with me.....one of the most beautiful I had read ..... and your love for lavender....I remember reading a few lines about that as well....I am thrilled you enjoyed...tis a pleasure...

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

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