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Argent Spires and Urgent Tongues
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Argent Spires and Urgent Tongues |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beloved It is your crest that covets my heart Seen through your eyes the fullness of my breast Drawn in the flood of each breath, pure and silver Yet the dart Somehow fine and true its pierce Pulses still intoxicating dreams and desires Blessed in the sting that succumbs me Mercy Thread the gape of winter in your stead That bleeds of blue to puddle of a hopeful tear Let silver band the flow and silence me against your heart Beloved Is the man this true of capability and its intensity For here I drink to full of happiness, mystical and magical Before the chapel of the pines to bear an innocent love And speak of white in tongues so sweet and sacred kisses Copyright Kkh 02/06/05 |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
This diamond my how you sparkle. keep um comin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kathleen, I really liked the way you laid this out, quite unique.  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sparkling diamond pristine beauty a winter brushstroke |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such feelings, such depth....so enjoyable reading a poem of love written of a time long past...one of a maiden deeply devoted to her lover...such passion. Well done my friend. Very well done. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is a sacredness in your lines here, that is touching in its beauty. Love, Margherita |
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