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Open Poetry #34

dodoitsu #3

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-02-06 11:23 AM

dodoitsu #3

midnight, that which swallows me
strips lilies and coffee eyes
while stars spooning cinnimon
curve against my naked back
alabaster sin

©snow'03

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"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-02-06 12:08 PM

smooth and yummie Snow -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

2 posted 2005-02-06 12:20 PM

brown eyes smilin at me hearin your music girl . I like it I like it alot.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

3 posted 2005-02-06 08:43 PM

E X Q U I S I T E! Love it sweetie!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-06 11:26 PM

lovely

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