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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-02-06 08:27 AM

Repost

A Walk In The Sun
Shallowing in a tropic sea
Gathering antiquity's birth
I dawdle in serenity.

The body warms in sundry rays
from whimsy's sip of mental mirth
a tea baptismal in the waves.

Absorbed in my temerity
left high and dry from neaps full worth
I steep in rare exotic tea.

Sacrosanct and minuscule
with inquiries of a fool

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2005-02-06 08:47 AM

Excellent, See More...I missed this the first time, glad you reposted....

Great use of language and form

___________ice/ford
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-02-06 09:26 AM

ice
That was nice ice. Thank you my friend.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2005-02-06 10:11 AM

Dear Seymour, I was just considering a "walk in the sun" to gather some energy.

See, we are perfectly aligned ...

Beautiful write!

Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2005-02-06 10:57 AM

well done! I love the format!

MGROVES

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california

5 posted 2005-02-06 11:07 AM

morning sir: a great one

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2005-02-06 11:09 AM

Margherita,
We are perfectly aligned ...

passing,
Thank you dear.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2005-02-06 11:10 AM

MGROVES
You are kind, thank you.

Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07

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where ever the fly fishing is good

8 posted 2005-02-06 12:42 PM

I belive I'll just sit here and ponder
the footsteps before me until I find the ability to walk in them.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2005-02-06 01:40 PM

Soulfisher
There are many that do that.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

10 posted 2005-02-06 02:49 PM

May I enjoy this
very very much?

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2005-02-06 03:00 PM

Sunshine
But you are the sunshine.

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