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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-02-06 01:09 AM




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"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

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Soulfisher
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1 posted 2005-02-06 02:21 AM


Another keeper but please dont die.
If I kissed your lips would it be enough to last an eternity of silence from you, and if I pressed my palms down over your eyes would I not wait patiently for the flutter palms to spur on my fingers in a game of peek a boo. So I could see you one last time.

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
2 posted 2005-02-06 02:28 AM


how poetic your response is.... thank you for that.

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2005-02-06 02:59 AM


Lovely!  I'd like to die with love on my lips but the world sure makes it difficult.
EvocativeVerse2
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4 posted 2005-02-06 03:43 AM


No dying! LOL! Love this. Oh yes I do. Well done indeed! But I warn you...if you die...I am taking this 220V wiring I have lying around here from my projects earlier today and hooking you directly to the breaker box!
GG
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Lost in thought
5 posted 2005-02-06 04:24 AM


Wow, what a lovely and poetic wawy to die...
Though no dying allowed right now.
This is excellent.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Susan
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-02-06 12:10 PM


what a fabulous mating of image and words - stirring and beautiful

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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