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Open Poetry #34

When I Die

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-02-06 01:09 AM

photo©dewalt

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"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

[This message has been edited by Snow (02-06-2005 03:47 AM).]

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

1 posted 2005-02-06 02:21 AM

Another keeper but please dont die.
If I kissed your lips would it be enough to last an eternity of silence from you, and if I pressed my palms down over your eyes would I not wait patiently for the flutter palms to spur on my fingers in a game of peek a boo. So I could see you one last time.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2005-02-06 02:28 AM

how poetic your response is.... thank you for that.

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2005-02-06 02:59 AM

Lovely! I'd like to die with love on my lips but the world sure makes it difficult.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

4 posted 2005-02-06 03:43 AM

No dying! LOL! Love this. Oh yes I do. Well done indeed! But I warn you...if you die...I am taking this 220V wiring I have lying around here from my projects earlier today and hooking you directly to the breaker box!

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2005-02-06 04:24 AM

Wow, what a lovely and poetic wawy to die...
Though no dying allowed right now.
This is excellent.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-02-06 12:10 PM

what a fabulous mating of image and words - stirring and beautiful

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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