Open Poetry #34 |
love her till tomorrow. |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
sleep through tonight don't let the moon wake you because he's on his way his clothes are gone and so is he you thought that maybe maybe maybe he might not fly like he always does he might not leave like he always does in the night while the world sleeps and while the heart is intact "love her till tomorrow" but he never could
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
that was beautiful,sad but beautifuly written |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
very melancholy write, with that sharp tinge to it. Hard to find a keeper... maybe someday, though, right? *sigh* Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
exhale Sad but well written. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's sad |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A dream of lasting love beautifully rendered. Nice to see you are back. Love, Margherita |
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