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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-02-04 10:47 AM

Of So and So

The building blocks of I don’t know
Are mortared with a so and so
They make a mountain seem to grow
Whose top is white with frozen snow?

Climbed this mountain many a time
Reduced the snow to prime enzyme
Drank this fluid of life brewed tea
Spat the residue out of me

Which fertilized a valley’s green
With rainbows of the path that’s seen
And promises of treasure true
Just for us that’s me and you

But sailing to horizons seem
Feels more like a wile a dream
And truth becomes the mist of time
Where in the wind sound bells of chime

White becomes all colors hew but
The bells are fading from my view.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-02-04 10:55 AM

what an ending

morning Sy

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-02-04 11:38 AM

yes, what an ending...but then this

Which fertilized a valley’s green
With rainbows of the path that’s seen
And promises of treasure true
Just for us that’s me and you

you fertilize valleys green in our minds, it is us who are blessed with your caring intellect....thank you Sy

Morning!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-02-04 06:23 PM

Drank this fluid of life brewed tea
Spat the residue out of me

made me smile, just imagining

M

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-02-04 06:25 PM

Enjoyed -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-02-04 06:58 PM

Great write!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2005-02-04 08:47 PM

My oh my...Sy oh Sy...
as you know Im on a break...but I couldnt read this gem of pen and not tell you
just how very special I find your words...
So many lines of Sy-wisdom and way cool.

The building blocks of I don’t know
Are mortared with a so and so

Reduced the snow to prime enzyme

Drank this fluid of life brewed tea
Spat the residue out of me

Which fertilized a valley’s green
With rainbows of the path that’s seen

And truth becomes the mist of time
Where in the wind sound bells of chime

White becomes all colors hew but
The bells are fading from my view.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Classic Sy-guy couplets of cadenced cool...

Now, about this lil jewel from your pen of kewl...

And truth becomes the mist of time
Where in the wind sound bells of chime

that couplet alone is poetic GOLD!!
but then so is the poet.

As always...you ching me chimes.

*ww*

Among the kingdom of the winds ...
perhaps there is one of elegant mind,
who has no need to intrude on the solitude of single things.

CB

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-02-05 11:22 AM

Good morning, Mr. T.!

May the bells ring for you forever more on the top of your mountain of lovely visions.

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2005-02-05 05:10 PM

passing
Thank you dear.

LeeJ
Thank you sweet and the best of mornings to you.

Maureen,
Made me laugh too.

Susan
Glad you enjoyed

Alli,
Thank you Alli.

JM,
Your answer is my candy for the day. I hope
this answer finds you well.

Earth Angel
Thank you for the love & hugs. you are always on my mind.

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