Open Poetry #34 |
A Time Not So Far Away |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Time Not So Far Away So this is how it feels to be in love with a beautiful girl. In the morning, until the evening she brightens all my waking hours, and now I yearn for the day, when she knows that she loves me as much as I love her, and she will stay, in the morning and through the evening, a time not so far away. JamesLee February03 2005 |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
James I used to make that wish and then sometimes I wondered whether it was my lack of looks, or background or anything else that sounded negative and would do as an excuse. If you talk to a woman you'll hear the term "men" as a generic. Talk to a man and the same only this time it is "women" who are generic. Everyone does what they do for their own reasons which have often nothing to do with anything but their own worlds. I'd like to see you take the idea in these words a lot further. Dave |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May that time come even sooner than you hope! You are so romantic, Dear Island Man! EA |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
May your dream manifest, dear James. Lovely. Love, Margherita |
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