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poe
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0 posted 2005-02-03 03:13 AM


My heart has gotten colder
Maybe it is a casuality of getting older
My heart keeps getting torn
Yet there seems to be no room to mourn
Everytime I close my eyes
Young and depressed wearing my disguise
Into the sun I stare
My eyes are so blank there is no glare
Looking for an angel above
Pining for lost love
White flakes begin to land on my skin
My mouth forces a grin
The street lights all burnt out
My heart heavy with doubt
Laying outside in the snow
Awaiting a tag on my toe
That clearly reads John Doe
A forgotten aspect of life
I have lost my wife
It is a casuality of getting older
That your heart gets colder

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

© Copyright 2005 Poe Wilson - All Rights Reserved
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
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1 posted 2005-02-03 03:16 AM


Wish I could remember how to be a kid again...
But I guess we all become what we never wanted to be... old.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-02-03 02:50 PM


Quite complex - read's simple and romantic feeling sorry but it is not.

Well worth thinking beyond the box.

Dave

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