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I'll post this 1999 one but I can't remember what I meant
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I'll post this 1999 one but I can't remember what I meant |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Another Rain Rain sleeting down My vision holds a foot in the middle I see you drenched in yellow Smile holding the rain Peace sought in vain How can I do this to you I cant I will chicken I will sacrifice For your smile and eyes that light Like a lightness in a storm Like a cuddle when alone You are there Do I know you deeply I don’t Do I understand you I try not to To understand you would be to intrude To take what you can give And to say thank you for it Maybe it isn't love But for me It is enough |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think thats a big part of love...accepting what is given, and giving what you have to give...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
James You are probably right, but I have stopped falling in love for years now. I decided at some point that if I carried on, they would eventually run faster than I could lurch. Dave Marsha I still dont know your voting system. Dave |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Made me think of the song by the Hollies – “Bus Stop” Great write Dave. JL |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
JL Many thanks. I wonder whether poetry is the next big growth industry. Dave |
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