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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA 
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Just when I thought everything was fine They said she was gone, it was her time The only one I could turn to with anything No more joy to my life she will bring Crying until there were no tears to cry I Wanted so much to just lay down and die Still fighting each day to get to tomorrow Under a blanket that's made of sorrow Someday soon all the pain will end I miss her so much, my mama, my friend Tears are cried and leave a stain When hearts give up and end the pain   For my mama Loyce 7-19-41 to 7-16-02 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how this is I lost mine when I was ten and now 25 years later, it still hurts  hugs to you |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I think everyone feels for you on this. No matter how you think you are ready for it, you are never ready and some times it can take a while to come. You are feeling the pain but in a way, may be it is better now that to have it built up. Take care and you will always find friends here. Dave |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
It never stops hurting, does it? I am sorry about your mom, itmust have been really hard to lose her at such a young age. My mama was the only one I had, my "father" is a pedifile. So loosing her made it that much harder. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this touches me. I lost my own mother at the age of eighteen months and my father was both parents to us. Having not really known her I find it amazing how still it leaves an ache. Very well done. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Some things we never recover from, just incorporate the grief into a somewhat drained and diminished existence. A fine tribute to your mother. Welcome to PIPs! Poets against the war is redundant |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
Thank you Dave & Gentle Spirit A person can never have enough friends. My mama loved poetry, (especially mine) a little prejudice I know, but she always enjoyed reading it anyway. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
oh sweet child, you have come to the right place to heal, but wounds like that leave scars, and when you just notice the scar and remember a good memory, and know she is always with you then the scars just become a place where one touched you, i never had a mom, she ran around, then took off when i was 11, left me with alcoholic womanizing abusive dad. just dont keep it inside, biggest mistake i made, it haunts you forever, i am just learning to get it out, little at a time, and learning forgiveness, keep love and forgiveness in your heart, and the pain wont take over,but you got to grieve, get angry, get sad, get it all out, sorry for rambling on~ just write it all out and there are so many good hearted angels here when ever you need one |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sending words of encouragement.The pain never really goes away, but as the others say,it helps to talk or write about it. There are many here who care, best marty |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
good poem Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful thoughts and words for your Mom...take care...James |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
Tears are cried and leave a stain When hearts give up and end the pain very true... when someone we love dies, even tears could not wash away the pain...a good write, im sure your mom would be very proud. |
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