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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Watch the candles upon hallowed walls slow dance in shadows. Feel their rhythms Feel their heat Smell the veil they carry you ------------in.------------ The tithings of red lotus and jasmine are just for you. Feel the passion of flicker and flame wanting you wanting me [This message has been edited by Soulfisher (01-12-2005 03:59 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now THIS... is a  ! |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
thanks sun shine I may not get the pics to work so i think I'll just settle with giving my pen some good ole combat fatigue.lol |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow this is a keeper  |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Thank you mgroves |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
liked the format, and the word together written in every line Simply warm and cozy prose |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Thank you for joining me LeeJ and glad you liked it |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Inspiring picture you paint here... Enjoyed the read. TD |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
This is very good. I like how you did it. Juju |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
VERY NICE, Soulfisher!! I am gonna keep this one!  Becka |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well written and wonderfully presented. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write..much enjoyed..love the format. Yup...a keeper. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
THIS DIAMOND, JUJU, SAVED BY GRACE,SCORPIO,AND ENCHANTRESS THANKS FOR STOPPIN IN AND GLAD YALL LIKED THE MESS OF MY FINGER PAINTING. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes yes... this is lovely... I like the way you presented this |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Just a flicker away... nice!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh, I like this very much - indeed SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
SUSAN, SEA AND SUSAN GLAD YALL LIKED IT, AND THANKS FOR THE REPLYS |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Yes Soul ... loved this , wonderful images portrayed in your words Hope |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Styled and written with flowing beauty...Wonderfull |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooo yes! very nice! |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
this is beautiful! i love the form and imagery...the words just come to life! |
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