Open Poetry #34 |
A discourse with Ol' Scratch |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
The knock at the door shouldn’t have been a surprise Ol’ Scratch had dropped by from time to time For cards Or a drink Or, general discussions about not a whole lot But tonight, it was different There was something I wanted to know I know, I said, that sooner or later You’re going to come by this shack And the call won’t be social That when you leave on that day You’ll be taking me with you Or, at least, the small kernel of me That matters at all And it terrifies me Not, so much, for the clay I inhabit This shell, you see, becomes less And less a thing that I cherish Or even for the things that I’ve learned For, all that I know, is known also by others Or losing the philosophies I treasure so much I know they will always endure inside books Its my memories that concern me Especially the ones I’ve edited so carefully Tell me, old friend, what happens to them? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
They become your celebration lovie. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Serenity summed the answer up beautifully. Hugs. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed You must pass them on now, in poetry! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Memories are the living light that carry our tired bodies through each day. |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
Its my memories that concern me Especially the ones I’ve edited so carefully Tell me, old friend, what happens to them? ~*~ If those carefully edited memories are in blue, black and white...then they are ours for eternity....and we will keep them warm in your memory. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Or, at least, the small kernel of me That matters at all Do cherish yourself...anyone that makes you feel less simply doesn't deserve you...and you do matter, the whole entirety of you, thoughts, soul, and heart....you are a part of life..life you...and a miracle...a beat in time so signficant, without you time would stop! Heart wrenching poem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx I'm sure Ol’ Scratch said, "they go with you of course." LOL Had the same conversation. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What was his answer? You can't leave me hanging like this! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
The same question we all ask. Only you put it into words. Thank you, marty |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
interesting thoughts in this - as far as scratch goes - a nice bit of sesame oil should take care of that wondering itch, then he won't be needed Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
The secret I understand is ask him or her to a game of cards and then break their arms before they deal. Like the words very much. Dave |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent e |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Its my memories that concern me Especially the ones I’ve edited so carefully Tell me, old friend, what happens to them? I could bend your ears backwards... or drown you *S*... with all this makes me feel... particularly these incredibly poignant lines... But... *G* I enjoy your work far too much to risk running you off. LOL So I'll just say... oh, yes... fantastic!!! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesomely written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
My old friend Bob knows....he still drops by occasionally, and did for a few minutes this morning. He used to love to talk and tell stories of things he'd seen in life. Now he can't talk (being dead), but when he visits I remember those times and things he would say....and the feeling that I get from him tells me he does too. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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